{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"83133161","dateCreated":"1518194131","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2018","userCreated":{"username":"grandduchesse435","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/grandduchesse435","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/mrwallisroom.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/83133161"},"dateDigested":1532915670,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Blog Feedback","description":"Lillie,
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\nI noticed that you put emphasis on a lot.That gives me a better idea of how many fish we are talking here.
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\nI was wondering, why didn't you elaborate on how long it would take for the human race to be affected.
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\nThanks for the info.
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\nElena","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"83133127","dateCreated":"1518193571","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2018","userCreated":{"username":"mrwallisroom","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mrwallisroom","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/mrwallisroom.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/83133127"},"dateDigested":1532915670,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Blog feedback","description":"Lillie,
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\nI noticed that you capitalized the words "pollution, climate change, and overfishing." I love that fact that you listed the causes of fish depletion and I think the caps makes them stand out. Great use of quote and transitions! You obviously care about fish depletion.
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\nOne thing I wonder is whether you could revisit and strengthen the last sentence? Also, it would be nice to hear more about the Great Pacific Garbage Patch.
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\nThanks for sharing,
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\nMs. V","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"96814173","body":"lillie,
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\nI noticed that the laast sentence " It is It is scientifically proven unknown on why did fish depletion start." this sentence dose not quite make sense mabye you could change it up a bit to make more sense
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\nyours trully
\nRory","dateCreated":"1518709175","smartDate":"Feb 15, 2018","userCreated":{"username":"childofthedevil","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/childofthedevil","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}